So in this section of the story the children discover the ship, meet Mrs Tredegar and the Bosun and go on imaginary adventures.
What do you think is important for you to include in the next section of the story? Take a moment to write down some ideas...
Now you've thought about it, here's some things to check you've thought of:
- change the setting,
- introduce new characters,
- introduce the children discovering new things and experiences,
- use adjectives and adverbs,
- use similes and metaphors.
Now try using the next 3 pictures of your story map to write the build-up for your story. Use the above points to help you make sure you include what you can to improve your writing. Don't forget to read your opening again to see where you stopped your story, before you carry on.